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It will not last forever, secret
Gardens too get old,
And in the icy morning you
Complain my feet are cold,

There were no wings of love as aid;
I had to climb the wall,
And tearing all the ivy off
It stood exposed and tall.

I do not want to hear the speech
That's caught inside your yawn:
"I know of secret gardens, this;
They don't stretch on and on."

And though our muted presence,
It leaves a funny stain,
We watch the fountains fall asleep
And freeze with English rain,

And through that stony quiet
The aching morning brings
I'm resolute and silent
And mum of holy things.

Even though their memories
Are hidden and unseen,
The blades of grass, caressing,
Tell what the stones have seen;

They're messagers in gardens
That speak up as they bloom,
But timeless, starving mornings
Are twilight in the gloom.

You're quick love, to accept it,
When leaves drip on your head,
That knowledge still consumes us:
We're faithful to the dead.

If I leave secret gardens,
I swear to you, my dear,
If I go bleeding somewhere else
I will not leave you here.
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Author's Comments

Things change, no matter how much you want them not to, no matter how much you grab on. And sometimes it's hard to know exactly what it is that's caused the change exactly. It's like you just wake up one morning and something's different. Where there was laughter and voices before, now there's just silence, and it's ever so hard to break it.

J.

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:iconlunalibera:
:iconheartbreakplz: I know. :sob: This is lovely...horribly, tauntingly truthful, but beautiful
:iconjanne-landet-poetry:
:) Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, and glad I struck a chord!

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:iconeefera:
This is... beautiful.

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I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

:iconjanne-landet-poetry:
Thank you so much! :)

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:iconjanne-landet-poetry:
Thank you!

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:iconpixxy-dust-fades:
I love this one! the essence of this human beings can identify with.I think we are all destined to know that feeling of change.

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*sprinkles pixxy dust*
:iconjanne-landet-poetry:
Thank you!
I confess I'm not sure what it is exactly, but the people who have read this so far seem to connect with it somehow! I guess we all feel this once in a while, but the feedback is still surprising to me. I didn't expect it could convey the feeling so strongly when I saw it in the shape of my love in the morning in a changing garden. I thought that'd be too distant and obscure.

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